Do you want to know what we thought about your story if it is unsuccessful? Then this is the service for you. We will send information regarding this service with our decline story notifications. Upon accepting the terms and conditions and making payment, we will send back a report sharing our thoughts on what we loved about the story and how it might be improved.

This service is available for £3.70 for stories up to 1000 words, £5.18 for stories up to 2000 words, and £7.40 for stories up to 3000 words. You can enquire about this service with your submission or follow the links we send with our decline notifications.

 

Please note:

*We reserve the right to refuse any story for any reason. 

*We will inform you if the service is fully booked, however you can arrange to join a waiting list. 

*No refunds can be given once the critique has been delivered or if you are unhappy with the feedback. You can however ask for further explanations and expansion on any points you would like covered in more detail. 



 

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Optional Feedback Services

As Feed Your Monster grows we are starting to see demand for feedback services for submissions.

Sadly, as we receive so many submissions, we cannot offer these services for free. Remember though, there is no obligation to use them. You can still submit to us for free. We do not have a reading charge and our contests remain free to enter. 

As experienced writers, we know how valuable constructive criticism and feedback can be. Therefore we offer these services to help you refine your pen, grow your writing skills, and strengthen your stories.

All feedback is based on personal opinion from the Feed Your Monster editors, and funds raised from these services are used to pay our authors.

Our creator, Rinoa Cameron, is experienced when it comes to line by line critiques. She will offer constructive feedback that will strengthen your story and refine your writing skills.

You can request the service as part of your submission, or send a story to us specifically for this service, which costs £7.40 for stories up to 1000 words, £11.10 for stories up to 2000 words, and £14.80 for stories up to 4000 words. 

 

Contact us for further details.

Please note: 

*We reserve the right to refuse any story for any reason. 

*We will inform you if the service is fully booked, however you can join a waiting list. 

*No refunds can be given once the critique has been delivered or if you are unhappy with the feedback. You can however ask for further explanations and expansion on any points you would like covered in more detail. 

Full critique from Rinoa Cameron

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General Submission Feedback

Full critique from Jim Corwell and Rinoa Cameron

Jim Corwell is an extremely experienced writer. His critiques are very strong, he won't mince words or beat around the bush, but he will provide feedback designed to build you up and ultimately strengthen your story. This is paired with thoughts from Rinoa Cameron, which will produce a potent critique. 

 

Rinoa and Jim have worked together for many years and are famous for differing opinions. When it comes to writing they seldom see eye to eye, and yet work together very successfully. 

 

A critique from them both will give a very rounded opinion that will provide you with plenty of food for thought as well as helpful tips. 

You can request the service as part of your submission, or send a story to us specifically for this service, which costs £10.00 for stories up to 1000 words, £15.00 for stories up to 2000 words, and £20.00 for stories up to 4000 words. 

 

Contact us for further details. 

Please note: 

*We reserve the right to refuse any story for any reason. 

*We will inform you if the service is fully booked, however you can join a waiting list. 

*No refunds can be given once the critique has been delivered or if you are unhappy with the feedback. You can however ask for further explanations and expansion on any points you would like covered in more detail. 

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